Kooser Poems
Ted Kooser, of course, is pretty well known as the current poet laureate. I've been looking at some of his poems and thinking about copying his general style, laconic prose with cool, imagistic details, and corrupting it with my weirdness. In other words, give my take on the world while taking bits of his style and approach. I'm sure it'll end up like nothing I expected, an odd synthesis, which is good. My poem below might be an example of this; let me know what you think (if anyone is reading this, that is).
Special Effects
by Donald Illich
The only reason
we didn’t die
in a nuclear war
was that
the special effects
hadn’t been
perfected yet.
But as the years
grow
we become
more and more
used to
the eventual
fallouts
of our
imaginations.
1 Comments:
I haven't read Kooser. This is a damned good poem. You lead with a terrific and weird idea (Nuclear war delayed because we lacked the special effects capabilities -- scary, because we have them now, and you're right, they inure us to shock), and then you didn't try to upstage your great idea, but ended it quietly (and with a good, simple summary and left us hanging. It's tempting, with a great wild idea, to try to push it further. I like the way you let the poem end quietly.
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